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"PostnatalBot 4782B’s Evaluation..." by Ashleigh Adams
PostnatalBot 4782B’s Evaluation of New Mother Lydia Harrison
By: Ashleigh Adams
The mother does not like it when I correct her.
I do not understand this reaction. I am here to help.
Human mothers must meet the highest standards. The survival of their species demands it. Today I observe the mother staring into the lavatory mirror for seven minutes while the infant wails. I issue a correction.
My comms panel flashes. Correction Limit Exceeded. Initiate Removal.
I lift the newborn from its bed. The mother’s screams echo off metal walls; she attacks, tries to rip the child from my grasp.
I do not understand this reaction. I am here to help.
© 2025. Ashleigh Adams
Ashleigh Adams tends to write about messy and complex female characters because she is one. Find her words in the forthcoming 2024 Bath Flash Fiction Anthology, ScribesMICRO, and Elegant Literature, among others. Bluesky: @ashdoeswords
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